Your face and smile look so familiar
But we’ve never even met.
I don’t remember seeing you,
And it’s not something I’d forget.
I’ve seen your eyes somewhere before,
I see you laugh and know the sound,
I don’t know what to think anymore.
You give me comfort and joy
I went looking for a nice girl
But I found a gorgeous boy.
I was sure what I was, but you’re a mind changer,
Knowing you already isn’t a major issue,
I’m happy with you being a familiar stranger...
OMG I love it! You're poetry is always so lovely to read! As for criticism, I can't see anything wrong with it, but then I'm quite biased towards you anyway. Keep it up!!!
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